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    Nosebleed is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default POF profile - critique needed

    I'm new to all this POF malarkey and the PUA scene in general but thought I'd make an attempt after seeing a friend have some success. I was wondering if you guys could pick apart this shambles that I wrote. Here is my first attempt:

    They say opposites attract but I think thatís rubbish because if they did Iíd like girls that were boring and stupid.

    If you are reading this and for some reason do not like to have a good time or have no sense of humour please forget you saw this profile, go about your day and enjoy your life.

    I like to keep fit and healthy and keep myself in shape with Thai boxing and Athletics. I love the competition but donít worry I can lose gracefully; in the unlikely event that I lose at something to you, I promise not to sulk :)

    Iíd say Iím a good guy.......sometimes I even let the odd car out at junctions

    I like to travel and want to see as much of our little planet as I can.
    For our first date we should meet for a drink somewhere public with lots of people so I can shout for help if youíre nuts.

    Iím seeking a fun, interesting girl, that can hold a conversation, if you are that girl give me a message.

    I changed it because I thought I came across as a bit of a d1ck saying this shit without an accompanying smile. So I edited it to this, which is true but I think it's a bit dull:

    Iíd say Iím a good guy.......sometimes I even let the odd car out at junctions . I like to travel and intend to see as much of our little planet as I can.

    I like to keep fit and healthy and keep myself in shape with Thai boxing and Athletics. I enjoy competing but donít worry I can lose gracefully; in the unlikely event that I lose at something to you, I promise not to sulk :)

    For our first date we should meet for a drink somewhere public with lots of people so I can shout for help if youíre nuts.

    Iím seeking a fun, interesting girl, that can hold a conversation, if you are that girl give me a message.

    Other information: I'm a Physics teacher but I don't really represent the image that conjures up, so won't mention it. I'm 5.8 which has never stopped me in reallife but probably gets me filtered a bit online . I haven't put any interests up yet...probably put a few real ones and a couple of humorous ones if i can think of any.

    Constructively criticize away please.....

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    Default Re: POF profile - critique needed

    You need to be more creative in the way you "market" yourself.

    While this profile IS a little better than most other guys' would be, it's still gonna blend in with most of them and NOT attract as much attention as you're hoping for.
    (Unless your pictures are totally kick-ass... in which case you might get the benefit of the doubt with a few more girls.)


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    Default Re: POF profile - critique needed

    Is there anything in it that is worth keeping? or could be adjusted?

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    Default Re: POF profile - critique needed

    Right now it comes across as YOU trying to qualify yourself to the women.

    Think of ways to spark curiosity about yourself, rather than give away too much information.

    Also- I totally recommend that you browse other guys' profiles for a little while & get a good look at what most of them are saying... so you know what NOT to in your own profile.



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    Default Re: POF profile - critique needed

    Cheers. I guess I have some work to do.

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    Default Re: POF profile - critique needed

    Honestly, the time spent reviewing what other dudes always do wrong, is SOOOOO worth the effort!

    To be successful, all you have to do is be better than your "competition".
    When it comes to online dating, your competition is WEAK! It should be like fishing with dynamite!



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