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    Question "Need help with plenty of fish profile

    So I followed some advice on my profile what I need help with is my about me this is my current one. My headline I'm kind of an asshole. But my about me does not go with it

    What are things I can say or redo to have that asshole personality. Here's my current about me give me some suggestions please. Here it is->


    "Wow, I can't believe you're looking at my profile. This is such an honor! Well, let's start with "Hello!" Or should I say "Bonjour, Mademoiselle!" Frankly, I can't speak French to save my life, but I hope to learn it some day. So, what is there to learn about me. Or heck, what isn't there to learn?"

    "Well, my name is Andrew, and as you can see, I try to be the most positive individual I can be. I love to meet new people, and I have many diverse interests. I'm self-employed, and love it because it helps me to step regularly out of my comfort zone. I have a learning disability, and I had a heart transplant when I was thirteen days old, but I refuse to let that come in the way of living my life as fully as possible."

    "Anyway, what can I tell more about me? Well, to start with, I have an odd sense of humor. I'm up for most anything, and will be honest about it when I think I'm not ready for the challenge (yet). I love to volunteer, I like reading, and watching and playing sports. I also love to sing, even though I would probably faint if I had to perform in front of an audience. I have an intense desire to learn to cook, and would love to take cooking classes some day."

    "Lately, I've also been attempting to take up yoga, mainly because of my bad leg, and to compensate for my lack of Flexibility. Helping others is probably my number one passion, and I would love to find someone who shares that interest."

    "Retirement and financial security are very important to me, I will go far to reach these goals. My number one financial goal is to help my parents to retire. They did and do so much for me, and I want to do something back. After all, they worked hard for years raising me and my two siblings. Financial security is also important for me because of my health. I never want to be put in a situation that I have to choose between food or medicine. Also, I want my future children to be able to do all the things I was not capable of. Someday, I wish to be able to retire to either North Carolina, or Florida."

    "I love to chill and watch sports (especially baseball), to read books or to go out. I've always wanted to have a go at BASE-jumping or skydiving, along with learning to play golf, or tennis, or fencing. Or why not all of them, just for the heck of it?"

    "I do still live at home, but plan to acquire my own place soon."

    "I'm looking for a woman who accepts me for who I am, and loves me for who I am. Someone caring and kindhearted. Someone who has a sense of humor, but can be serious when needed. I'm willing to get to know anyone who someway fits the bill, and I trust you are too."

    Do not message me if you are a Stripper, bartender, waitress, aspiring actress, Scorpio, or if you have implants....it never works.

    "Congratulations on making it to the end! So, enough reading, and I would love to hear from you.


    Any help? Thanks

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    Default Re: "Need help with plenty of fish profile

    You're using Bravo PUA'S "top secret headline."

    And yeah, it's totally incongruent with your profile, so it's not gonna work.
    AND... you begin your written section by supplicating to the girls, by expressing amazement that they're taking the time to read your profile & saying you're honored" that they did.

    This totally gives off a desperate, needy, inexperienced vibe.

    THEN, you tell everything about yourself... EVERYTHING.
    You're not creating any mystique to draw them in & make them want to know more.

    You finish it by thanking them again with a "congrats" (IF they even make it that far) & then tell them you would love to hear from them, which sounds like you're begging for attention. (more neediness).

    The thing is, you DON'T want to come off as really being an asshole. That "headline" is just a hook to get them to check out your profile.

    But you DO need to create curiosity... not tell your life story. Because now there's nothing to discover about you. You put it all out there hoping to build rapport by hoping some girl will have some things in common.

    At the very best, right now you're only going to attract potential FRIENDS... and probably in the "3-5" range, because those are the types of girls who are desperate enough to just find A guy in general.

    When I first created my online dating profile a couple years ago, MINE sounded soooooo similar to that. And I got like 2-3 messages from girls who I wasn't at all interested in.

    It sucked major balls! LOL

    But after doing some research & discovering PUA / attraction techniques, I figured out the secret... it's all in the way you market yourself.

    You have to stand out from every other guy... (All 15,000 of them) whose profiles sound just like the one you wrote.

    You want to stop coming off as being just "a nice guy" start giving off a vibe of being a FUN, CONFIDENT MAN.



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    Default Re: "Need help with plenty of fish profile

    Than what should I write I'm really lost on how to do this since I've never done it before. Any advice or suggestions of sayings to put instead?

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    Default Re: "Need help with plenty of fish profile

    Get creative. Be more original.

    I used the premise of a "Breaking News Story" & wrote it in the 3rd person perspective. It was like a journalist doing a story on me, describing me & some of my interests & characteristics.

    AND... I had photos to back up everything I said in my profile.

    It was slightly cocky, but in a fun way; as to NOT come off as being an arrogant douche.

    I gave some REAL info about myself, (so it wasn't all just trying to be funny & clever with jokes & one-liners) but only enough info to spark curiosity & make the girls want to know more about me. Which means, in order to do so, they would have to interact with me.

    You have to tell them SOME real stuff about you, in order to express that you're genuine.

    But trust me, it was COMPLETELY unlike any other guy's profile, so it stood out.


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    Default Re: "Need help with plenty of fish profile

    I took T-Mal's advice awhile back and did the news story thing and girls love it. I got a few girls who sent me "helpful" messages about it saying it was too conceited but that was their personality, I've honestly received SOOO many compliments from girls on my profile.

    My headline reads "You win! This is not a joke! Click Here!!" And girls love it too, goes quite well with the news story profile. I'll frequently get things like "Oh and what do I win btw?" Which is exactly the kind of response you want - they've taken interest in something you've written down and now they're asking for you to flirt.

    In my first date section I put a brief, more personal touch about me being a simple guy and enjoying active things but that a 30 minute meet up for lunch is great as well. I think T-Mal keeps up the news story persona in his first date section and either is fine imo, just depends on the personality you want to portray - I wanted to portray "Hey I'm a fun, original creative guy, but I can also get personal and serious if I need to."

    Pictures are important too, make sure your pictures are congruent with the personality you're trying to emphasize in your profile. If you come off as a different person in any of these areas it's a sub-conscious (and sometimes blatant) turn-off.


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