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    sunnyvale is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Judge My Profile

    Here you go. Play Whack-A-Mole with it.

    "I've got a mile a minute personality. I'm fast paced and hate wasting time. You always need to be productive. I like people that can take a joke and dish one right back to you. I enjoy saying outrageous things and seeing how people react. My dazzling smile keeps me out of trouble.

    I'm fairly calm. There's no point in sweating in social situations. That's what work is for. I don't do drama. All it does is make problems bigger than they really are.

    When people say to me,"how are you?" I avoid saying "ok" or "good" because that's everybody else's line.

    I'm not an open book so I'm going to avoid any deep conversations. Depending on my mood I'll message you something charming, mouthy, topical, or philosophical."

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    Bballking is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default Re: Judge My Profile

    It really sounds like your trying to convince yourself here that you don't have any deeper insecurities. If you don't sweat in social situations, there's no point in saying it. This is something your going to have to show her or anybody for that matter in real time.

    What you want to do is show you don't sweat in social situations by making a kick arse profile that is fun to read. First, you need to have fun writing it. I don't feel that here at all. If your not having fun writing it, she's not going to have fun reading it.

    Write it to match your sense of humor. Here's an excerpt from my profile. I'm sarcastic, dry, and I never laugh at my own jokes, not my style. So I wrote my profile like that.

    I Spend A Lot of Time Thinking About:
    "Why one picture on the wall can make the entire wall look smaller. Why dogs like their bellies scratched but humans like their backs scratched. Why I have half a dozen 2 dollar bills. Why Captain Morgan only mixes well with Coke. Why money doesn't grow on trees but avocados do."
    You don't need her

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    sunnyvale is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Judge My Profile

    Thanks for whacking the mole. I agree it could use a little more pop. I'll chew on your suggestions. I left out the shorter sections because "about you" is king of the mountain.

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    Paladin6596 is offline PUA in Training
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    Default Re: Judge My Profile

    Seems a little short. 250-300 words is a good range to target.

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    sunnyvale is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Judge My Profile

    Here's a revamp I did based on your guys feedback. Let me know what you think.Then ending is a little sappy but I think it helps balance it out. I threw in some hooks and was going more for interesting/intense than funny. Thanks for your opinions!



    I'm a mile a minute guy. A phase to describe me, “is constantly in motion.” I'm always trying to squeeze that extra bit of awesome out of every situation. Sometimes I pace like an animal in the zoo, except I actually end up somewhere that matters. Try and keep up.

    This means I'm a never-ending work ethic. An infamous place had a sign that read, “Work shall set you free.” I'm a huge believer in that even if that was the only good thing to come out of that place. A phrase. Everything else was atrocious. +10 points for knowing the place I'm talking about. Basically, I'm all about raising the bar.

    When I'm not busy like a bee, I enjoy giving people a hard time and expect the same in return. If you are easily offended I'm not the guy for you. Nothing's better than getting your ribs cracked and somehow smiling at the same time. This means I enjoy say outrageous things. My dazzling smile keeps me out of trouble.

    You don't understand this but I'm an incredible listener. I've had countless clerks, tellers, and bartenders tell me their life story without even telling them my name. Strangers on the street have taught me so much. Someday I'll pay them back when I have my dream job. I dare you to ask me what that is. My philosophy is I'm already comfortable in my own shoes so I might as well try rocking out in yours.

    I'm always willing to open my arms up to change but I do this without letting go of my values.

    I'm looking for a girl that when I look into her eyes I find myself finding deeper and deeper with no harness, her voice sounds like honeydew melon to my ears, and she makes me puff out my big chest even further than I thought it could go.

    Hit me up if you think you can do that.


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