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Thread: OkCupid Profile Critique

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    Default OkCupid Profile Critique

    My first round of online dating had little to know success. My second round seems to be better, but I get a lot of profile views after my first message, and no response back, except for the bots that re-direct you to their camera site.

    So, I would like others to look at my profile and critique it. Share some thoughts.

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    Also, an opener that I have had some luck with is just saying, "Just a small town girl"
    I leave it at that. Most of the responses come back are, "living in a lonely world". After that, I go from there with banter and C&F, then building rapport.

    Thanks again,
    Sagu

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    Default Re: OkCupid Profile Critique

    You need more (and better) pictures. You don't look like "the life of the party who everyone wants to be around" as you described. Instead, you look lonely.

    Get some pics of you doing things & with friends. Project a fun, outgoing persona.

    Also- don't say your first round of online dating was a dud & now you're back hoping for better luck. (That's how it currently sounds).

    Your profile as a whole, is incongruent, & currently lacks a hook. It also has nothing "fun" or "engaging" to spark curiosity about you.

    It's actually a typical guy profile.
    If you were to anonymously browse the GUY section, you'd see that you blend in with most of them.

    Your opening message however, is good.
    I can't remember which PUA/Coach I read that from, but he was using it on Tinder. Definitely a good one.

    Overall- you need a revamp / makeover on the profile.


    Need one on one private coaching? PM me for details.


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