It's pretty long but I've had quite a few girls message me back and they were really intrigued and turned on. When I do get a reply they are usually really great, they either open up completely and list a bunch of stuff about themselves, or they tell me they were impressed and intrigued. Leave me some feed back and tell me what you think or what you'd change.
"I'm curious to get to know you and find out what kind of experience your looking for. A few things about me; I'm 21, I'm 6 foot 300, I value a real connection, but I'm also a very sexual person. I enjoy teasing, I'm the kinda man that will come up to you from behind while your cooking, grab a handful of your ass and bite your shoulder, then spank you and tell you I'm going to take a shower, then WALK AWAY. I'm bad for you, I constantly tease you to keep you walking around the house trembling in anticipation, wondering if I'm going to throw you down on the floor and make you feel like a real woman or just whisper sweet nothings into your ear while I softly hold you. I'm a Dom, which means a lot of different things but the main thing it means is that I care for my Sub, I don't want to just use you and throw you to the side, I'll mold & guide you into the best woman I know you can be, this doesn't mean I want to change you, it means I care enough to want you to be a strong independent woman. I don't demand respect, because I don't have to. I'm brutally honest, & I know exactly what I want so I don't play games. That being said, what are some things you want me to know about you?"