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    londonboym is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Is my profile too much?

    This is my POF profile. Anybody got any advice on how to improve it? Thanks.

    Oh hi, I didn't see you come in. Take a seat over there whilst I lean nonchalantly against this mahogany bureau that's teeming with expensive brandy and tell you about myself.


    I'm the sort of guy you take home to your mum and in turn gives you an approving nod once I've walked past. I sense this happening but I have the class not to mention it.

    As I leave your house for the first time, after hours of demonstrating my respect and intelligent banter, your dad shakes my hand and calls me son. I find the eye contact quite intense but I have the strength of character not to look away.

    Parents won round, I then take you out and get you smashed on jagerbombs and cheap house wine. I buy you a kebab on the way home with all the trimmings. Yes, cheesey chips too.

    You know you enjoyed the night but you can't remember much of it.

    You could have all this and more, you lucky girl.


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    drgnsfire12 is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default Re: Is my profile too much?

    Has any girl responded to this ????? ...... because it comes off as being a bit Psycho
    "The purpose of our lives is to be happy" - his Holiness the Dalai Llama of Tibet

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    londonboym is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Is my profile too much?

    Quote Originally Posted by drgnsfire12 View Post
    Has any girl responded to this ????? ...... because it comes off as being a bit Psycho
    Hahah cheers! A couple have said it has made them laugh out loud, but I'm starting to think it only works for girls who have a certain sense of humour. The less clever ones probably think I'm being serious.

    I'm going to change it up.

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    drgnsfire12 is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default Re: Is my profile too much?

    I get that, I have a pretty deep/sharp sense of humor too and a girl has to be pretty smart to get it .......
    The ones that do and can give it back to me are always very special and worth holding on to, so do you keep it to pull the really good ones out or change it to get a broader appeal from girls that may not be worth your time and efforts !?!?!?!
    "The purpose of our lives is to be happy" - his Holiness the Dalai Llama of Tibet

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    Default Re: Is my profile too much?

    I was going to say the same thing drgnsfire was going to say. Do you really want to change it to attract some girls you probably won't like ? If the ones that get it and actually respond to you are the type of girls that get your humor why not stick to that ? Then again, if you want to just do it for the pussy, I understand.

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    Default Re: Is my profile too much?

    You definitely need a certain type of women to see this as humorous. Not that the rest wouldn't, but they might not appreciate it because it can come across as a bit of a try-hard too.

    Focus on showcasing 2-3 of your best qualities. And I mean show, don't tell. For example, if I wanted to show that I live life with passion, this is how I would do it:

    "I find intense joy in the things that I do. I believe it's important that everyone possesses the desire to live fully.

    I have skydived, and I LOVE the experience of letting go completely. It was the best moment of my life, and it should be yours too.

    I have also spontaneously booked an air ticket and gone on a holiday, just because I can.

    I liken myself to an excited child who's discovering everything for the first time. And I hope you are excited about life as well."
    You don't have to say "I am passionate". That's lame. It accomplishes nothing too, because it doesn't paint her a picture.

    Hope that helps.


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