Re: Online Profile
I read it, First impression I got was that you were trying to hard. If I can pick that up, They will too.
There is two ways you can go about this:
1. T'mals way, - His profiles are so interesting, random, hilarious and confident that 4 pages later and you want more, its like that book you never want to end. I've tried and tested it and had multiple women contact me.
2. My way - I will use short statements, that are Intriguing, Showing Alpha, Intriguing, Entertaining, (the idea that there is something you will miss out on if you don't make the effort to get to know me). I like all my stuff short and efficient. I believe that if a girl has to look through 100's of profiles a day, it has to be quick enough to encourage her to glance, Intriguing enough to take the spot light from other profiles. (Note: T'mals are so goddam interesting that it just takes the spot light). But if I saw Tmals on every guys profile i would get demotivated by the second profile i read in a day. Easy on the eye.
Everything else between these two will not maximize success in a quantity or quality scenario.
Men, we need to value our time more then we value women. This isn't to say women are not valuable. But who are we to believe in something so illogical, as men we should realize that without our time(life), we would not even be able to pursue women, but only our mother who gave us life. Why do we think we should prioritize them over our time(life) unless she is the one who gives me/my children life. Man is Sovereignty.