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  1. #1
    Caveman757 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Tinder game critique wanted- conversation included w/ number close

    Hey guys I've got a tinder conversation I had last night that I number closed and I'd like to here y'alls input.

    Girl is a pretty basic HB8 that had a lot about a love for animals in her bio.

    me- (girls name)!
    HB- (my name)!
    me- whats the most exciting thing you've done today?
    hb- I just fed a snake. Thats pretty exciting.
    me- Thats extremely exciting- I love feeding snakes they're so quick
    hb- this one made the mouse ump into the water and drowned it
    me- you've got yourself one evil snake on your hands Id watch your back haha
    hb- it was kinda awesome
    me- I surprised you like snakes most girls are "eeek a snake wtf burn the house to the ground!" lol
    hb- I work in a pet store
    hb- I like everything.
    me- Alright so what if you went to take a shower in the morning and boom alligator in your bathtub
    hb- I would want to know how the damn thing got into my house then upstairs into my bathroom
    me- nature works in mysterious ways
    hb- That is true. I wouldn't freak out though
    me- I could see you keeping it as a pet tbh
    hb-I would. Yes.
    me- I'm gonna have to watch out for you and your reptilians
    hb- I only have tortoises
    me- I'm not sure if I believe that considering it just came from the girl that said she'd keep a bathtub alligator as a pet
    hb- I swear lol
    me- Im still undecided on getting fed to a boa constrictor lol
    hb- I wouldn't do it
    me- sureeee ahaha- I hate messaging up here you should text me- what is your number?
    hb- ###-###-####

    Completely open to any critiques guys always looking to improve my game

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    Caveman757 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Tinder game critique wanted- conversation included w/ number close

    Here's another one from last night-

    Girl is a pretty cute HB8 without any information for a bio

    me- (girls name)!
    A couple days pass by
    HB- hey sorry I've been super busy with work lately
    me-Aye its cool work always comes first
    hb- Ha yeah I guess so, so whats good?
    me- well I'm bout to make my world famous spinach and sausage lasagna *dhv attempt
    hb- oh yummy
    me- yeah I love to cook
    hb- I love to bake
    me- That could mean one of two things lol *attempted to try to get her more involved in the interaction with humor
    hb- I mean like bake cakes and cupcakes and stuff
    me- Didn't much take you for a stoner lol thats awesome I've never been able to get frosting right on cakes
    hb- see I used to work in a donut shop so its not that hard for me anymore
    me- Cant say I've had a frosted donut lol
    hb- what kind of donuts have you been eating?
    me- Glazed lmao *tried to start flipping the conversation with shorter replies to have her put more into it
    hb- thats so boring though
    me- there you go coming at my donuts
    hb- I do what I want
    me- damn you're feisty
    hb- oh I know
    *waited a few hours to reply
    hb- do you have a snapchat?
    me- (snapchat name) *I now realize should've teased her here and made her work for it
    hb- I added you
    *10 minutes later- I hadn't accepted her friend thing either
    hb- what (company name) do you work at?
    me - (location w/ joke about location)
    hb- Ohh i gotcha
    me- I hate coming on here to message you should text me- whats your number?
    hb- ###-###-####

    What do you guys typically do with girls like this who aren't very flirty?

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    Default Re: Tinder game critique wanted- conversation included w/ number close

    Should've added this all to one post my bad-
    Here is another two girls who I haven't closed yet but I tried a more game styled approach

    HB8 with a bio listing quite a college career

    me- (girls name)!
    HB- haha yes?
    me- I've go to say you've got the eyes of a feisty girl thats hiding an inner nerdiness
    hb- What??? ahahahah
    me- nobody goes to school for aerospace engineering without an inner nerd lol
    hb- lol you right...
    me- No worries your secret is safe with me!
    hb- haha thanks!
    me- You can't tell anyone but I might just be a bit of a nerd myself *shouldn't have qualified myself to her- big mistake on my part but I wanted to try to pull some life into the conversation w/o questions
    hb- haha how so
    me- I'm a Biochemistry major *dhv attempt of sorts
    hb- lol nice! what kind of job do you want to get with that?
    me- you know become an evil scientist haha I want to work for a pharmaceutical company
    *will update

    Really tried to use some more direct stuff from this forum with this Hb9 that had no bio information

    me- (girls name)!
    hb- hello
    me- I've got to say you've got the eyes of a feisty girl with a deep down neediness that you're not afraid to show
    hb- is that so?
    me- absolutely feel free to correct me if I'm wrong
    hb- The feisty part you are right I'm not so sure about the nerdiness
    me- Damn I'm usually only into girls with a hint of nerdiness but you do have the cutest smile *attempt at push-pull
    *will update

    Both of these above unfinished conversations I tried some new stuff that I normally wouldn't say so I'd really like to hear how I can improve upon using more of a game styled approach

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    Jironasaurus is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default Re: Tinder game critique wanted- conversation included w/ number close

    It doesn't feel like there's enough of an impact overall.

    Quote Originally Posted by Caveman757 View Post
    Here's another one from last night-

    Girl is a pretty cute HB8 without any information for a bio

    me- (girls name)!
    A couple days pass by
    HB- hey sorry I've been super busy with work lately
    me-Aye its cool work always comes first
    hb- Ha yeah I guess so, so whats good?
    me- well I'm bout to make my world famous spinach and sausage lasagna *dhv attempt
    Your so-called DHV was kinda weak. I mean... self-boasting "world famous spinach and sausage lasagna" sounded more like you're just putting an interesting spin on your own cooking rather than an actual DHV attempt.

    hb- oh yummy
    me- yeah I love to cook
    hb- I love to bake
    me- That could mean one of two things lol *attempted to try to get her more involved in the interaction with humor
    hb- I mean like bake cakes and cupcakes and stuff
    You can see she's at least attempting to keep the conversation going, which means that whatever you did prior to opening her worked. That means it's your photos that's doing the heavy lifting for you at this point.

    Your humour was a light nice touch. I said "light" because again, not a knockout punch kinda impact, just something nice to keep it going for a lil bit more.

    me- Didn't much take you for a stoner lol thats awesome I've never been able to get frosting right on cakes
    hb- see I used to work in a donut shop so its not that hard for me anymore
    me- Cant say I've had a frosted donut lol
    hb- what kind of donuts have you been eating?
    me- Glazed lmao *tried to start flipping the conversation with shorter replies to have her put more into it
    In a way, you got lucky here. You related back to her, and it so happens she worked in a donut shop... which kept you going with easy rapport.
    hb- thats so boring though
    me- there you go coming at my donuts
    hb- I do what I want
    me- damn you're feisty
    hb- oh I know
    *waited a few hours to reply
    hb- do you have a snapchat?
    A few minor shit tests in a row (3 to be exact). You did all right on this one.

    A better way of dealing with "I do what I want", instead of "damn you're feisty", is something like "Feisty. I like that." That way, you are turning her feisty attitude into something you like, which means you are "qualifying" her.


    me- (snapchat name) *I now realize should've teased her here and made her work for it
    hb- I added you
    *10 minutes later- I hadn't accepted her friend thing either
    hb- what (company name) do you work at?
    me - (location w/ joke about location)
    hb- Ohh i gotcha
    me- I hate coming on here to message you should text me- whats your number?
    hb- ###-###-####

    What do you guys typically do with girls like this who aren't very flirty?
    And of course, the ignoring worked. Like I mentioned earlier, it's your photos that already got her hooked from the beginning, which is why she is committing more to the interaction so quickly.

    In addition, your willingness to walk away helped. So... the way I see it, it's not the strength of your conversation that is helping you. You do have a few bits that went well, but overall, this is still pretty mundane conversation.

    What I typically do with women who aren't very flirty... is to ping them. I do a little bit of flirty, and then continue with normal conversation (still keeping it interesting in the meantime though). And then I repeat the same process over and over. It's all about consistency.

    As time goes by, when they start to like you even more, they will respond to it. Just a matter of whether she breaks sooner rather than later.

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    Default Re: Tinder game critique wanted- conversation included w/ number close

    Thanks for the reply, I completely agree with what you said I'm still pretty new to all of this. I worked really hard on my profile so I can see why my photos would be helping out like this.

    Pinging sounds like a really good idea and I'm definitely going to start trying a technique like that.

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    Default Re: Tinder game critique wanted- conversation included w/ number close

    Nice to see the profile working out well then.

    Keep working at the conversation. Post your logs and I'll be glad to critique more.


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