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    wikiwally is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default What do you think of my Okcupid self Summary?

    Self Summary:

    Wallywiki likes to prank people about having bugs on their clothes.

    He has an intense passion for science fiction. I always see him researching advanced scientific theoretical questions like, " if you see a white girl with a black girl booty, does that mean she has a black father?"

    I wouldn't describe him as conventional. He goes for what he wants-no matter how weird or unpopular. He decides based on how he feels- not what is logical. I can tell this by some of the coursework he took while an undergraduate and some of his future career aspirations. He once told me that, " if a thousand people do a foolish thing- it's still a foolish thing. "

    He's really scared of heights and large bodies of water.

    He said he's tired of the club scene and that he wants to find a lady to date and maybe if she's not creepy, a Michigan state fan, or hasn't seen the most recent episode of Star Wars- maybe get in a relationship.

    Wallywiki is tall (6'1) large and dark white. ( 66% African/33% American/1% regular black)

    He currently resides in Ann Arbor and was last seen at the Arb catching a Pikachu.

    All comments and criticisms welcome.

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    Default Re: What do you think of my Okcupid self Summary?

    Guys I redid the introduction to my self Summary .

    Self Summary:

    Interviewer: How would you describe Wally wiki?

    Wallywiki likes to prank people about having bugs on their clothes. He says you should always have fun.
    He's the type of person that will pull out a seat from someone when they are about to sit down. He doesn't take things too seriously.

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    Default Re: What do you think of my Okcupid self Summary?

    Sounds okay, but Wally wiki....???? And it's a little strange that it's written in the 3rd person, but I guess it's okay. Maybe makes it sound more light-hearted than if it were written in the 1st person.

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    Default Re: What do you think of my Okcupid self Summary?

    Quote Originally Posted by wikiwally View Post
    Guys I redid the introduction to my self Summary .

    Self Summary:

    Interviewer: How would you describe Wally wiki?

    Wallywiki likes to prank people about having bugs on their clothes. He says you should always have fun.
    He's the type of person that will pull out a seat from someone when they are about to sit down. He doesn't take things too seriously.
    It can come across as juvenile. Even if you are 16 and writing that, it can come across as lame for girls that age.

    Personally, I reckon you should do away with the third person point of view. Your username sounds like a Disney-created name for kids, and having it consistently being repeated doesn't do you any good.

    Think about what qualities (2-3 is enough) you might possess that you believe women would find attractive in a man. Write from that. Do more showing, less telling. Obviously, you're already doing that with your current description, although the subtext isn't very... tasteful.

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    Default Re: What do you think of my Okcupid self Summary?

    Thanks can you explain what you mean by 3 qualities? Are you referring to 3 personality traits? I would describe myself as passionate, a non conformist and adventurous

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    Default Re: What do you think of my Okcupid self Summary?

    Yup! Those are it. Never use the words "passionate", "non conforming" or "adventurous" in your profile. Describe them in pictures. Show her how exciting and interesting it is being a part of your lifestyle.

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    Default Re: What do you think of my Okcupid self Summary?

    So I reworked my profile and I have been getting responses.

    It's kinda weird. I've lately been opening with , "How are you (username) " or " How's it going"

    Self Summary: (2nd attempt)

    Not your typical bachelor...😂😂😂😃

    I don't like long walks on the beach, I'm not down to Earth ,chill or laid back.

    I like to live based on what I feel is right, not on what others around me are doing or what is expected of me. I'm not a follower - I'm leader. I like to travel the narrow road where few go, instead of the large road- which is more popular.

    When I'm not being a workaholic in healthcare; I'm an avid moviegoer for comic book films during the night time.

    My secret identity is Clark Banner. My superpower is watching every comic book movie opening night. My super weakness is trying not to finish the popcorn before the trailers stop.

    I also am a wannabe sci- fi writer. I had the number one no-seller for New York times. It was called , " Don't quit your day job" .

    As for women, I'm looking for a good sense of humor and not too dramatic. Also serious about dating.

    End of a summary.

    One thing that I have noticed is that I'm good at getting numbers online, but the girl never wants to meet up. I think it's an attraction thing.

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    Default Re: What do you think of my Okcupid self Summary?

    What are your transcripts like?

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    Default Re: What do you think of my Okcupid self Summary?



    • Me: How is it going rwetr67. T.G.I.S
    • HB: Hello. It's ok. Just getting home and relaxing. You?​
    • Me: I'm actually at work. I hope I don't get caught on my phone. How old is your child?
    • HB: There's 2, 8&3​
    • Me: So you're in ypsilanti. I just moved there back from ann arbor so expensive
    • HB: I know. I wish I could afford to live there. My oldest is school of choice in a2, kind of a pain transporting, but better then alternative. ​
      Yesterday - 7:14pm
    • I like the walking dead also, but season 6 finale was awful. I hear game of thrones is good. I like to write when I'm not at work. What do you do outside of work ​

    This is one of a few recent transricpts I had. I'm gonna hit her back up, when she gets back online.

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    Default Re: What do you think of my Okcupid self Summary?

    Nothing in there to keep her going though; it's understandable why they don't really care to meet up. You're basically falling into the same trap most guys fall into - talking all prim and proper, having a mundane exchange about each other's day to day lives. Compare your transcript with your OKCupid profile, and feel the difference.

    Oh, your current profile is much better than all your previous ones by the way. More genuine, and more personality. What you're doing now in your profile is a wide description - you are taking bits and pieces of you and putting that down on the page. Try narrowing your description down to 2-3 good qualities of yours.

    Look at it this way... your ideal woman goes on to your profile to read your description. She has an idea the type of man she wants. What do you think is her type? Without compromising who you are, write from that perspective. Give her a snack, not the full meal... let her have a taste of a bit of you, thus you narrow it down to 2-3 qualities.

    Then, show her those qualities. Humour can be one of them, in which case, you'll actually wanna make her laugh.

    Wit is another quality that you can show. Your wit is on display in your current profile, so now you just need to make it better.

    And have more standards in the "You should message me if" section. Don't be afraid to list what you really want. A good sense of humour, and not too dramatic is a decent criteria, but still lacking in terms of mental imagery.


    Pro tip: Avoid the emoticons.


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