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  1. #11
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    Default Re: criticize my profile

    Thanks! That means a lot. I was pretty crummy at online game 3 months ago, but I have been using some stuff from David M., Scot McKay and Race. I found that Style's "fake jerk" profile technique only attracts skanks, so I ignore that tactic altogether. I think online is by far the best place to sarge. I can log on at 11 PM in my PJ's with a cup of tea, send out 5 messages, and more than likely date at least one of them by the end of the week. The best part is, if you look at the male profiles, you realize that just by being funny and having decent pics you beat 90% of the competition right there. The rest is really in the strength of your messages and having an intuition as to when to go for the number or AIM. I go for the AIM, then ask a girl out after 20 minutes or so, by saying "we need to get coffee soon" or some variation thereof. They always say, yes, then I give them my number and they give me theirs. Online dating is literally just window shopping for girls, and you can easily screen girls.

  2. #12
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    I hope I can say the same sometime soon! haha! My online game is pretty crummy as it stands, I like to try to improvise off of their profile.

    Like one girl (HB 8) had a little list saying how she would like Number 1. Going out. and Number 2. Would be a quiet dvd night in PJ's. So I said hey, you're profile was pretty cool although your list was quite funny. You say you like one thing then say the complete opposite it's adorable... But yet kinda goofy at the same time! See what I did there?

    That got a really good response I actually had a day 2 organised with her but I couldn't make it and I'm pretty sure she'd flake now anway. But progress none the less!

  3. #13
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    That is a good opening message. I like to take from the girl's profile as well, especially if her tastes and likes and values line up with mine - I put more effort into the message then, although I keep every first message short, no more than 3 or 4 sentences max. Sometimes you can come up with brilliant messages that get no response though. Girls don't just not reply because you aren't their physical type, or they dislike what you wrote. Sometimes they don't reply because girls especially can get very one-track minded, and one guy already really caught their attention and they are focused on him and ignoring the others for now. When you get a message back 2 or 3 weeks after you sent it, this is most likely the case.

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    I know what you are talking about. These girls online find one thing that they dont like about you. Could be height, build, whatever and it doesn't matter what you wrote. You aren't getting a response. They can go ahead and look through their other 25 messages that day. Must be fun..

    Heres a recent one i did with crobs help since i was talking to him on facebook at the time.

    Subject line: Gianna "Brass Knuckles" Corleone

    Body:
    Not causing too much trouble lately are you?! I hope the family didn't have to send you to break anyone's legs recently but we both know... structure must be kept in order haha

    I find it hard to believe that your HUGE Italian family who taught you to eat would be okay with wendy's as a first date! Ahaha come on now! Are you sure you are an Italian girl? :P

    Get back to me if you need some help on your next hit



    I thought it was clever and possibly my best message yet except i got no response. I think its because im a smaller guy girls online dismiss me pretty quickly. She was a really cute italian girl. I just ran with the mob thing since she was talking about her huge italian family and then she had wendys listed as her first date so i busted on that. I'm wondering if i took it a little too far. probably should have sent only the second paragraph but whatever. win some lose some

  5. #15
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    I lost a girl once when she said she didn't want to admit she met a guy on plenty of fish. I told her, "it's ok, I'll tell everyone you're a dominatrix I met on an adult dating site."

    I amused myself so much I didn't care! lol. She was a witch with no sense of humor, so it was a good way to close it out.

    But I haven't used that line since...

  6. #16
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    InTheMaking the message sounds a bit drastic imo, but I guess it depends on the girl some probably dig it.

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    yea i know.. like i said, i think i went too far with the mob thing but it was fun

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    Default Re: criticize my profile

    no see i actually like the message because sometimes my game is to blow girls out cause i want a girl that will run with my silly games. so for the girls i want to get that message is perfect and a little funny. not bad.

    but now if you want ur game to work with tons of women i would have taken away the subject line and put it in the ending with the joke and then maybe chilled with the mob thing. just make it more as a joke like u did at the end. but trust me i dont want boring girls or mad girls. i have adjusted my game to them cause i would rather just blow them out and make sure not to pick them up
    I live in my reality and you’re a guest

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    yea i totally feel you crob. some of my messages i send on there are completely over the top and if she isn't fun enough to run with it then i didnt want to talk to her anyway


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