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    Default criticize my profile

    Hey trying to work on my profile. I dont have many good pictures caz I dont ever take pictures never have.

    any help is appreciated

    poker0698 plantation Florida singles, plantation Florida women

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    Default Re: criticize my profile

    #1 - Change your intent to "dating," not relationship, even if you want a relationship. There's many reasons for this.

    #2 - Don't list any of your favorite anything. Delete all of that. In fact, don't even obey the POF recommendations at all. Excellent choice in movies, BTW. Except Troy, but no one has perfect taste.

    #3 - Add a lot of humor to it.

    #4 - Change your headline. It's gotta pop. Mine is, "Do you look great in an eyepatch?" then my profile is pirate themed. Just think of something different. Questions seem to do well, especially ones that are kinda zany.

    #5 - Capitalize your hometown name, you want the profile to look polished.

    #6 - When writing your profile, never say, always demonstrate. For example, don't say you have a sense of humor, demonstrate it in your writing. Don't say you're family oriented, maybe write a funny story about something you did with your bro recently.

    #7 - In your interests section add things like Running marathons, football, travel, etc that you have in your profile. Try to have about 10, and balance physical activities with hobbies and academic ones, if possible.

    #8 - Make your Profession "Student/Poker Player" - Student should be there if you are one. You're more likely to attract other students. For the record though, I am a student, and approximately 66% of my dates from POF and OkCupid have been with women with careers who graduated recently, so it doesn't hurt you with non-students.

    Good pics though man, I thought they were good. Not being gay, just saying they are generally good and should do the trick.

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    yeah not bad. some regular profile pics with some going out and all that but yeah. rather than reading a profile i though i was reading a check list. women can do that cause they wont do the chasing. you need a fun playful descriptive profile that will catch there attention and cause curiousity. curoiousity makes women want to get to know you cause they dont feel like they already know you. a girl could read this a see a normal guy with no adventure or anything and will have a pretty planned out time. you need something to make them always suspect whats going to happen next. that ur far from the path and nothing can be predicted with you.


    and not bad. im a poker player as well. i like ur style sir. i play pokerstars and full tilt. usually SNG and cash but ill throw in an MTT every now and then.
    I live in my reality and you’re a guest

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    oh and u should probably make the blue shirt ur main photo. girls wont go to a page where u look boring and unadventurous. just show parties, traveling, friends, culture and overall fun. something a girl wants to be a part of
    I live in my reality and you’re a guest

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    mg1
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    thx Raven & Crobinson I already changed some stuff

    Crobinson There is probably a lot of poker players on the PUA Forums I expect. Do you post on 2p2? I just started reading the forums and read most of "The Game".

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    Martano Guest

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    I definitely agree with the humour aspect. Also try to make it read less like a list and more of an interesting/funny story.

    Take a look at mine (not perfect, but I'd say it's decent)

    martano Squash, football, gym, partying!, being rando

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    mg1
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    Default Re: criticize my profile

    ya martano we have the same first date lol I dunno where i got it from maybe it was off of you. Nice profile i like how u have pictures at parties.

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    Martano Guest

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    I like the picture you have with Stewie in the background! Don't worry about the first date, I probably copied it from somewhere else too! haha!

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    Robbing a bank was my invention. Glad to see others use it though!

  10. #10
    Martano Guest

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    Oh Raven. You're actually right there! You're posts are always very helpful and for that you have my thanks! I really need to get some serious sarging done now im free of the christmas rush. I want to be one of the guys who you are saying in 6-12 months 'man i think he is getting it now!'.


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