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    ayeitsjohnny is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Critique my text.

    I met this girl the other day and wanted to know how my text game is doing:

    ME: You can stop staring at your phone waiting for my text now.
    Her: Hahaha hena(Her friend)?!?!?
    Me: No. It's prince charming.
    Her: Shutup hena! Whose phone are you texting me from?
    Me: Dang you suck at guessing! Try a name from the other gender. Haha.
    Her: Heno?!?!? Hahaha.
    Me: Lmao. You crack me up. Who the hell name their kids heno?!
    Her: Your parents could have named their next boy Heno!
    Me:God damn I'll be so embarass if my name was heno. I hope your not thinking of naming your kid that.
    Her: Ewww! Why would I! I wouldn't even name t hem hena! Hahahha jk HENA!
    Me: Haha. I can't wait until the real hena text you. You'll be so confused.
    Her: What??? Hena? or then who is this??
    Me: I'll consider telling you if you buy me a plane ticket to Fiji so we can get sushi.
    (She called this restaurant fiji when it was fuji when we first met)

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    ayeitsjohnny is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Critique my text.

    Her: (my name)!!!
    Me: I'm considering changing my name to heno though.
    Her: Hahaha oh no please do not!
    Me: Haha. SO w hen do you wanna go get sushi?! I'm free Saturday before the game and sunday morning.
    Her: Omg we should go Saturday before the game! Or sunday sounds good too.
    Me: Oh god so indecisive. Let's go on Saturday at 5!
    Her: Ok! Sounds good is the game at 8.30?
    < I stopped texting>
    P.S. I'm new to the texting game.

    -Now I'm thinking of texting her. "Morning Heno! Get excited for sushi today.

    -I need tips on how to develop Kino at the restaurant and how to escalate the texting into roleplaying.

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    Default Re: Critique my text.

    In this case, sounds like you did just fine. The only thing I would recommend is limiting the cursing/swearing. This is just my personal preference; but it isn't classy, and you don't want things that make you look classless on record. It's fine if she swears a lot though.

    If she legitimately knew who you were, though, the banter might have gone on a little long. But if you knew she didn't know it was you, you could carry on the banter as "hena/heno" as long as you want; the longer you do, the more embarrassed she is, the more you have her in your hands.

    For Kino, start with fist bumps, high-fives, graduating on to light touching on the arm, , shoulders, leg. Light touching should evolve from back-handed taps, to slightly longer brushes against her, then open-handed touches to the knee, "your my little sister" type side-hugs, front hugs.

    Don't have any clue what you mean by role playing. broad subject. many applications. many mediums.

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    ayeitsjohnny is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Critique my text.

    Thanks for the tip. Oh, I meant how do I get from this to calling her "wifey" or establishing she's my stalker and such.

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    Default Re: Critique my text.

    I'd be careful with "wifey." It might telegraph more interest than you actually have in her, or basically give her the wrong idea, possibly attention / role-play she isn't ready for. Maybe once, for fun, in the right situation, where it's clear you are just playing around.

    It would be better to role-play with less concrete concepts like the stalker, or project a future onto the relationship with something like "hey, it's a good thing we get along even when we're not getting along, or else this setup would never work out." "This playful banter is a good sign, I can see that we'll be friends for a long time to come."

    Just know that these are the kinds of things that WILL set up a long-term relationship (as long as you don't F\/CK up some other way, like ass-raping her poodle with a garden weasel).


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