Ok so i have just read half the game last week. And after my first weekend at the game i tried to utilise some of the techniques outlined. i feel i did some very well and others not so well but hey i gotta start somewhere. Sorry if this is written long and badly, but i will improve.
Friday night i chatted up a HB9 while my buddy took care of her friend. I Kiss and number closed.
Saturday night i talked to HB8 in the club and number closed. Then later i kiss closed a HB6.
Now for the first girl my text after waiting one day was this
"heyo. venue (club name) was a good venue on friday night. Ill see u downtown next week for some banter"
Basically my points are
1.I didnt mention my name to see if she remembered me/name
2.I tried to be funny in the first sentance
3.I didnt ask her to meet me, i told her
were these accurate or good things or how could i have improved?
The second girl's text was like this.
"hey loisha.club was fun last night. we can dance again downtown next week!im pretty sure i spelt your name wrong, you can correct me"
How could i have improved this.