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  1. #1
    erohs12 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Need my online profile reviewed I need to keep improving it

    Okay so I am extremely rusty at pickup because I took a two year break when I got into a relationship. Now I'm out and happier than ever about it and I need to step up my game again in all playing fields. I've never tried online game before and could use any help. Today I redid my profile using some info on the forum and using parts of some of the best profiles on here. I think its pretty solid but if some other people could take a look and help me that would be great!

    I can't figure out how to get the link because its encoded but search erohs in okcupid and my profile will come up

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    Mobius is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Need my online profile reviewed I need to keep improving it

    I can't review yours, but my advice is to keep it fun and light-hearted and no specifics like "I enjoy the beach, music," etc., cause that's boring. Make it sound like you enjoy having fun and meeting new people so much that they're boring if they don't go out with you.

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    erohs12 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Need my online profile reviewed I need to keep improving it

    Could my profile be too funny? Because when I was half done with it I actually had more luck. Also, Im thinking it might be wayy too longg. Ill post what my profile says for those who can't view it.

    Congratulations! by looking at this profile you have demonstrated that you have excellent taste, either that or I've sent you an amazing message and you just have to see what kind of fantastic person I am.

    So I was looking at this thing today and I decided that it is almost impossible to describe who I am in a few paragraphs. However, I think it is probably worth my time to give it a shot as I am giving this whole website a chance. 
First off, let's start with what I am NOT like....

    Im not one of those guys that baths himself in spray tan, sticks his finger in an electrical socket to do his hair, and goes out at night wearing sunglasses expecting to meet girls while he gets obnoxiously drunk and makes a fool of himself. Where's the sense in any of this??
    I am not the guy who encircles you with his group of lame-ass friends that all tote some lame-ass sports wardrobe. The kind of guy that says bro every other word and will only talk to you about sports and where you live. No I'm definitely not one of those lameass guys. Nor am I the guy that spends way to much time try to be hip, who hates everything mainstream or anything that becomes mainstream and talks about how he heard of everything before everyone else did. No I am definitely not one of these guys that one ups you so incisively you'd like to stab his eyes with your fork on the first date!
    ...so what am I like then???
    Here is the point where I get to gloat about all of my accomplishments and tell you how great I am. Obviously, this is not an easy thing to do as I prefer to retain my modest demeanor. But, again, I signed up for this so here it goes. I have my own place F*%#K living with my parents. I am definitely not like everyone else and I pride myself on being that way. I was the person who would ignore what the "crowd" was doing and go my own way. I have plenty of friends and all of them are just as important to me as my family is.......as I consider a lot of my close friends as family anyway. I work fulltime and go to school and although I am busy, I can always make time for that special someone. I think that chivalry has been beaten with a large pole that has spikes in it and is dipped in acid.....but I still try to keep up Chivalry on my end. Pulling out chairs, opening car doors, the whole nine yards. I have worked hard my whole life for everything and I am glad my parents raised me that way. 


    What Im doing in my life
    Writing music and studying landscape design. I play guitar and sing and love writing lyrics. I'm working on recording all my music and finishing an album. If you want to be a groupie sign up now theres a waiting list
    Im really good at
    Guitar, music, writing poetry, working with my hands, rolling things, being a good friend
    The first things people usually notice about me
    Girls keep telling me I have gorgeous hair and although flattering, I don't do anything to it besides wash it and shake it out when its wet. It has started to get annoying as I have gotten too many compliments so pleaseee if you like my hair too keep it to yourself because I'm sick and tired of talking about it! lol
    The six things I could never do without
    Music, my guitar, friends, family, adventure, and you
    On a typical friday night I am
    Probably watching Oprah reruns or knitting, decoding ancient scriptures, or fighting crime as a badass new superhero you'll watch a movie about five years from now.
    The most private thing I am willing to admit
    I am a robotic humanoid from the movie Terminator.
    I am looking for
    Girls who like guys
    Ages 18-25 Near me
    For new friends, long-term dating, short-term dating, activity partners
    You should message me if
    Come on, you already know you want to message me because I either sent you an awesome message or you're reading this going, "This is hilarious, is this serious? This guy is so much fun." So just do it.

    I have good pics being out with friends and doing cool and funny stuff so I think my pics are good.


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