last nights storry,like an opinion

Hi everyone!
Allow me to introduce my self.
My Name is Nikola AKA Hitch.
I am from Serbia and I am new in the society,
allso I am a beginner in the seduction of women
I was reading a lot of Mystery's stuff before I decided to start aproacing women.
And I recently come across to Style's book "The Game".
I think that I am becoming better in the art of seduction.

So this is my story from last night:
I went out with my girl-friend and her girl-friends,that I didn't know,
to a night club in our toun.
I met all the girls from the group,and there was one in particulary that I noticed.
Her name is Ivana.
I know that at some point through the night I was going to aproach her.
So I did. What I did was that i asked her(like I forgot)was her name Katja.
She responded slightly offended: "NO,it isn't my name!"
she sad:
"How is posible that you forgot mine when I remembered yours,it's Nikola ,right? "
so I sad:
"Well yes it's easy to remember myne when it is a beautiful name"
She tried to prove to me that her name is as beautiful as mine
Then again she told me her name and I told her(as she bored me with her demonstrations)that i now belive her.
I sad: "OK you also have a beautiful name,but mine still sounds better"
Through that point we started a convercation.
It was weary good,than she started giving me ioi's. There were at least 5 of them.
So I reached for the phone and gave it to her with the words: "Type your digits so I can see you next time"
She asked me what am I expecting to happend through that point
I was,like, Whaaat!?(in my mind)
So I used a girlfriend storry:
How we'll hang out for a few days,then we'll start dating. It will last for about 8 months,then she'll be jealous when other girls come to say hi to me. This would be a couse to all of our fights that we are going to have,that will lead to a brake up.
Than after 2 months she is going to see that she can't be without me and after a while we"ll be together again.
She will then propose to me,and I was going to accept her proposal.
The funny thing,she interupted my storry by asking if we are going to have children
I sad that we'll have a boy and a girl
-she gigled,and said hov she would like yo have a boy and a girl
and so,blah blah blah.....
she was in to me and gave me her noumber
As well I was excited to tell you my storry I allso wanted to hear your opinion. What do you guys think,is this a good storry to tell to a girl if she asks me the same question,or I just got lucky?

(sorry for my englis.I speak good english but my spelling is not so good

i like the your approach. very easy and playful negs and teasing. you didnt mention anything about Kino or some kind of Sexual Tension building. but overall you did well from what you put up. more info would be nice but from this is seems like you did ok. i like the story but then you kept it going where lots of women would feel uncomfortable. i like when you said we will date then you will end up getting jealous and we are going to break up. i have used something like that, it is basically like a false disqualifier and it works lovely but instead of saying getting back together and proposing i would take it here "ok well im going to get your number and we are going to start talking and dating on and off. but then when we finally get in a relationship, we are going to have tons of fun but you being so controlling and jealous is going to lead to lots of fights and were going to break up. its meant to happen but i want all the fun times that comes with it." this will show your not needy and that you think you will have a good time. and then if she says well what if that doesnt happen cause im not that stuff. then you say well then you are going to more than likely be mad in love with me and end up proposing and then pull it back in where you had it. but you want to wait for that part once you have seen their are investing in the roleplaying and are contributing meaning that they like it.

overall though i like your approach. not bad!!

Overall not bad at all. Only thing I would like to see you add is some dhv after the negs and before the Number Close. If done right they will be begging for the opportunity to give you their number! As far as the roll play you did. Great job, those things work great and a lot of guys don’t use them cause they are scared of the idea but once you have the IOIs and you can start returning them you solid. Also remember (especially if you into mysterys stuff) once you get 3 iois phase shift. I don’t doubt that you could have kclosed her that night if you would have worked for it. Great job though, play that number right and your in.

cool. get out every day. i get a bit of a buzz when i know i am hitting my places to hunt, to game. early days after work.... i got out. days off work i got out. these days i work for myself and i get out in some way whenever i can. i can have a day in sometimes, but generally it is consistancy... i gotta get out and game girls every day as well as do some work to better myself everyday

Thanks you guys!
There shure was some Kino
I got her noumber,so we went out,she even invited me to her place.
I am sorry for replying so late.
I'm lack of spare time,I work about 10-12 hours a day.
Again,thanks guys,this forum is right place for me,as i just started gameing.
I went out sarging again,and I can tell I did some good game.
There are some rough edges that I have to fix and I will,with your help,I hope

nice job dude. Let us know where and how we can help